Re: this is one of my old poems i found- need feedback

Posted by demonsblackrose on May 8-04 3:37pm
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very nice, some of the words dont rhyme at the end of your sentences, other than that, it is a very nice poem. i like how it keeps on contradicting what was previously said.

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this is one of my old poems i found- need feedback - spidermonkey02 - Apr 24-04 2:53pm

Re: this is one of my old poems i found- need feedback - demonsblackrose - May 8-04 3:37pm

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